Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child my parents bought 1 bike with the four wheel for me and my. My dad teach me how to ride the bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do think so. Riding bike is what most people would choose if there were to travel for a short distance. I used to ride bikes to school every morning and nowadays people can rent.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充父母买车和父亲教你骑车的细节。注意过去时:用“bought”和“taught”;“四个轮子的自行车”可说“a bike with training wheels”;删除不完整的“for me and my”,并让表达保持简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike with training wheels when I was a child, and my dad taught me how to ride it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答方向明确,但要用“riding a bike”或“cycling”,并将“if there were to travel”改为自然的条件表达,例如“when they need to travel”。最后一句“people can rent”缺少宾语;请说明现在人们可以租共享单车,并补充其用途。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. I used to cycle to school every morning, and these days many people rent shared bikes to get around the city.
× Yes, when I was a child my parents bought 1 bike with the four wheel for me and my.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike with four wheels for me. My dad taught me how to ride the bike.
“four”表示四个,后面的可数名词“wheel”应使用复数形式“wheels”。
× Yes, when I was a child my parents bought 1 bike with the four wheel for me and my.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike with four wheels for me. My dad taught me how to ride the bike.
这里泛指自行车的四个轮子,不需要使用定冠词“the”。应说“with four wheels”。
× Yes, when I was a child my parents bought 1 bike with the four wheel for me and my.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, my parents bought a bike with four wheels for me. My dad taught me how to ride the bike.
“my”是物主限定词,后面需要接名词,不能单独放在句末。若只表示给自己买,应去掉“and my”,说“for me”;若还要提到另一个人,应补出名词,例如“for me and my brother”。
× My dad teach me how to ride the bike.
✓ My dad taught me how to ride the bike.
句子描述的是童年时发生的事情,应用一般过去时。“teach”的过去式是不规则变化“taught”,不能使用原形“teach”。
× Riding bike is what most people would choose if there were to travel for a short distance.
✓ Riding a bike is what most people would choose if they were to travel for a short distance.
“bike”是单数可数名词,泛指骑自行车时应在前面加不定冠词“a”,说“riding a bike”。
× Riding bike is what most people would choose if there were to travel for a short distance.
✓ Riding a bike is what most people would choose if they were to travel for a short distance.
“if”从句中的主语应指代前面的“most people”,因此应使用主格代词“they”。“there”不能在这里代替人的主语。