Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, I don't have a bicycle because my family is not wealthy.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Actually I don't think the bicycle was important vehicle in our country because we all people travelling like public transport and private vehicle and actually some some people like to ride bicycle but.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add a brief detail if you can. Since you are talking about your childhood, use the past tense: “didn’t have” and “wasn’t.” The phrase “my family wasn’t wealthy” is understandable, but “we couldn’t afford one” sounds more natural and specific.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I usually walked or took public transport to get around.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer about whether bikes are popular now, and complete your thought instead of ending with “but.” Use “bicycles” or “cycling” naturally, and correct the grammar in “we all people travelling.” Explain your view with a specific reason or comparison, using a linking word such as “because” or “although.”

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Most people prefer public transport or private cars because they are more convenient for longer journeys. However, some people still cycle for exercise or short trips.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× When I was a child, I don't have a bicycle because my family is not wealthy.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bicycle because my family wasn't wealthy.

The sentence refers to the student's childhood, a period in the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense: don't have becomes didn't have, and is not becomes wasn't.

6: Present tense issue

× Actually I don't think the bicycle was important vehicle in our country because we all people travelling like public transport and private vehicle and actually some some people like to ride bicycle but.

✓ Actually, I don't think bicycles are important in our country because we all travel by public transport or private vehicles. Some people do ride bicycles, though.

The question asks about whether bikes are popular now, so use the present tense are rather than the past tense was. Use the plural bicycles to refer to bikes in general.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually I don't think the bicycle was important vehicle in our country because we all people travelling like public transport and private vehicle and actually some some people like to ride bicycle but.

✓ Actually, I don't think bicycles are important in our country because we all travel by public transport or private vehicles. Some people do ride bicycles, though.

Use by to describe the means of transportation: travel by public transport. Like does not express this meaning correctly here.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Actually I don't think the bicycle was important vehicle in our country because we all people travelling like public transport and private vehicle and actually some some people like to ride bicycle but.

✓ Actually, I don't think bicycles are important in our country because we all travel by public transport or private vehicles. Some people do ride bicycles, though.

The phrase we all people travelling is not a complete, correctly formed clause; use we all travel. The response also ends with but, leaving the final thought incomplete. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use though to show the contrast.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Actually I don't think the bicycle was important vehicle in our country because we all people travelling like public transport and private vehicle and actually some some people like to ride bicycle but.

✓ Actually, I don't think bicycles are important in our country because we all travel by public transport or private vehicles. Some people do ride bicycles, though.

Use plural nouns when speaking about bikes and vehicles in general: bicycles and private vehicles. This also makes the general meaning clear.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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