Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have bike when I was child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in our country, but when I was child then uh, the time was changed and uh, there were no use of bikes like nowadays. Now the technology has developed and the bikes are very common in our country, even a single.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct, but use the articles “a” before “bike” and “child.” Add a brief reason or detail to make your response more developed.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family didn’t need one because most places we went were within walking distance.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly, then explain how bike use has changed. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases such as “the time was changed,” “there were no use,” and “even a single.” Use a specific comparison and correct grammar, such as “when I was a child” and “there were fewer bikes.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities. When I was a child, fewer people used them, but now many people ride bikes for commuting because they are convenient and affordable.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× No, I didn't have bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Bike and child are singular countable nouns, so each needs an article here. Use a before both nouns.

22: Article errors

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

Child is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a before child.

3: There be issue

× there were no use of bikes

✓ there was no use of bikes

The noun use is singular and uncountable in this expression, so the verb should be was, not were.

22: Article errors

× the technology has developed

✓ technology has developed

Technology is used generally here, so it does not need the definite article the.

26: Sentence structure errors

× even a single

✓ Remove even a single, or complete the thought with a clear phrase, such as even a single person can own a bike.

Even a single is an incomplete phrase and does not express a complete idea in this context. Either remove it or add the missing information so the sentence is complete.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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