Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I'm children. Uh, I'm uh, uh, I'm was children. I I enjoy by road to the bike in neighborhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. Bikes are popular in my country because we don't have the streets special for bike don't uh, so it's very dangerous to ride the bike in the streets with the cars. So I don't think it's popular in my country. We use.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Répondez directement avec une phrase au passé : « Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. » Utilisez le gérondif après « enjoy » (« enjoyed riding »), et ajoutez un détail concret sur l’endroit où vous faisiez du vélo. Évitez les hésitations répétées et les répétitions pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood, especially on quiet streets.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Votre réponse contient une contradiction : après « No, I don't think so », ne dites pas que les vélos sont populaires. Expliquez clairement que leur popularité est limitée, puis donnez la raison en utilisant une expression naturelle comme « there aren't many dedicated bike lanes ». Terminez votre réponse au lieu de laisser la phrase « We use » inachevée, et évitez de répéter la même idée.
Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. There aren't many dedicated bike lanes, so cycling on busy roads can be dangerous. As a result, many people prefer to travel by car or public transport.
× Yes, I had a bike when I'm children.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The question refers to the past, so use the past-tense verb was, not the present-tense form I'm. Suggestion: use was or were when describing a past situation.
× Yes, I had a bike when I'm children.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
The speaker refers to one person, so child should be singular, not children. Suggestion: use a child for one person and children for more than one.
× I'm was children.
✓ I was a child.
The sentence describes the speaker in the past, so was is the appropriate past-tense verb. Avoid combining am and was; use only was.
× I'm was children.
✓ I was a child.
The sentence refers to one person, so use the singular noun child with the article a, not the plural children.
× I I enjoy by road to the bike in neighborhood.
✓ I enjoyed riding my bike around the neighborhood.
The student is describing a childhood activity, so enjoy should be in the past tense: enjoyed. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the past-time context.
× I I enjoy by road to the bike in neighborhood.
✓ I enjoyed riding my bike around the neighborhood.
The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund, or verb ending in -ing. Use riding rather than by road to the bike. Suggestion: remember the pattern enjoy + verb-ing.
× I I enjoy by road to the bike in neighborhood.
✓ I enjoyed riding my bike around the neighborhood.
By road to the bike is not the appropriate prepositional phrase here. Around the neighborhood naturally describes where the speaker rode. Suggestion: learn common verb and preposition combinations, such as ride around a neighborhood.
× Bikes are popular in my country because we don't have the streets special for bike don't, so it's very dangerous to ride the bike in the streets with the cars.
✓ Bikes are not popular in my country because we don't have special streets for bikes, so it is very dangerous to ride in traffic.
The sentence is structurally unclear, and the positive statement that bikes are popular conflicts with the speaker's answer and reason. The correction makes the intended meaning clear and connects the reason to the result. Suggestion: organize the idea as a clear statement, followed by because and a complete reason.
× Bikes are popular in my country because we don't have the streets special for bike don't, so it's very dangerous to ride the bike in the streets with the cars.
✓ Bikes are not popular in my country because we don't have special streets for bikes, so it is very dangerous to ride in traffic.
The sentence refers to bikes in general, so use the plural bikes rather than the singular bike. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally about a category of things.