Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I had not a bike because I'm lack in balancing so I I'm not brave to bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's quite popular in my country because it's quite often to see some bikers have a ride on the road.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但有明显的语法和搭配问题:过去的经历应使用过去时,可说 “I didn’t have a bike”;“lack in balancing” 和 “brave to bike” 不自然,建议改为 “I wasn’t very good at balancing” 和 “I was afraid to ride one”。可以补充一个具体原因或经历,让回答更完整。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t very good at balancing. I was afraid I might fall, so I never really learned to ride one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,但 “quite popular” 和 “quite often” 重复使用 quite;“it’s quite often to see” 以及 “bikers have a ride” 都不够自然。建议用 “bicycles are popular” 或 “cycling is popular”,并用更自然的表达描述你观察到的情况,例如在路上经常能看到人们骑车。还可以补充骑车的用途或受欢迎的原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country. I often see people riding their bikes on the roads, especially in the mornings. Many people use them to commute because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I had not a bike

✓ I didn't have a bike

这里是在否定过去发生的情况。一般过去时的否定通常用“didn't + 动词原形”,所以应说“didn't have”,而不是“had not a bike”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I'm lack in balancing

✓ I'm not good at balancing

“lack”是实义动词,不能放在“I'm”之后直接构成这个结构。可以改用“be good at doing something”的结构,表示“擅长做某事”;否定形式“not good at balancing”表示不擅长保持平衡。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I I'm not brave to bike

✓ I'm not brave enough to ride a bike

原句重复了主语“I”,而且“brave to bike”搭配不自然。删除重复主语,并用“brave enough to do something”表达“足够勇敢去做某事”;“ride a bike”是更合适的骑自行车表达。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× I think it's quite popular in my country

✓ I think they're quite popular in my country

这里谈论的是复数名词“bikes”,所以应使用复数代词“they”,而不是单数代词“it”。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× it's quite often to see

✓ it's quite common to see

“often”是副词,不能自然地放在“it is ... to see”这一结构中作表语。这里应使用形容词“common”,表示“常见的”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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