Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I always wanted to learn to ride. Everyone else have it. I have a Pike, but not me. No one taught me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, every kid at that time when I was young, every cat has a bike except me.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain why you did not learn to ride. Use the past-tense form “had” rather than “have,” and avoid unclear phrases such as “I have a Pike, but not me.” If you mean that you had a tricycle or another kind of bike, name it clearly. Add one specific detail, such as how you felt when other children rode their bikes.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, although I really wanted one. Most of my friends could ride, but no one at home had the time to teach me, so I never learned.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear present-day answer to the question, then support it with a reason or example. Avoid repeating the same idea, and check word choice and verb tense: “every cat” is unclear here, and “has” does not agree with the past-time reference. You could mention where people commonly ride bikes or why they use them.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children. Many families buy bikes for their kids, and people also use them to get around because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Everyone else have it.

✓ Everyone else had one.

The sentence refers to the student's childhood, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. Use one to refer back to a bike and avoid repeating the noun.

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, every kid at that time when I was young, every cat has a bike except me.

✓ Yes, when I was young, every kid had a bike except me.

The phrase when I was young places the situation in the past, so use had rather than has. The original also repeats the idea and is not a complete, clear sentence; the correction expresses it as one complete sentence.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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