Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, for sure. When I was young, I got a bicycle for my dad and I and really I was really like the bike because it helped me to balance my foot in my body. So you are really like you riding a bicycle.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, for sure, definitely, because our traffic was really messy. So if you have a bike, you can go everywhere you want to go or you can park anywhere you want to park. So it is convenient in the cart.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about the bike or how you used it. Use the past tense consistently: say “I got a bicycle from my dad” and “I really liked it.” The phrase “balance my foot in my body” is unclear; explain that the bike helped you develop your balance. Avoid repeating “really” and make sure the final sentence has a clear subject and verb.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a bicycle when I was about eight, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood. It also helped me improve my balance and become more confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain that bikes are popular because they are convenient in heavy traffic. Avoid repeating “for sure” and “definitely,” and replace “traffic was really messy” with a more natural phrase such as “traffic is often congested.” Clarify the final idea: bikes are convenient in the city, not “in the cart.” Use linking words such as “because” and “also” to connect your points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Traffic is often congested, so cycling can be a quicker way to get around. Also, bikes are easy to park and are convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× When I was young, I got a bicycle for my dad and I and really I was really like the bike because it helped me to balance my foot in my body.

✓ When I was young, I got a bicycle for my dad and me, and I really liked the bike because it helped me balance on it.

The pronoun follows the preposition for, so it must be the object form me, not the subject form I. A useful check is to remove the other person: you would say for me, not for I.

5: Past tense issue

× When I was young, I got a bicycle for my dad and I and really I was really like the bike because it helped me to balance my foot in my body.

✓ When I was young, I got a bicycle for my dad and me, and I really liked the bike because it helped me balance on it.

The sentence describes a past experience, so use the past-tense verb liked. Was really like is not the correct form here; remove was and use liked.

26: Sentence structure errors

× So you are really like you riding a bicycle.

✓ So I really liked riding a bicycle.

The original sentence has an unclear subject and an incorrect sequence of words. Use I as the subject to describe your own experience, and use liked riding to form a grammatical sentence about a past preference.

6: Present tense issue

× Yeah, for sure, definitely, because our traffic was really messy.

✓ Yeah, for sure, definitely, because our traffic is really bad.

The answer explains why bikes are popular in the country now, so the present tense is appropriate. Use is rather than was when describing a current condition.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× So it is convenient in the cart.

✓ So it is convenient to travel by bike.

In the cart does not express the intended idea of using a bicycle for transportation. Use by bike to describe the means of travel.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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