Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题，但时态使用不准确（讲童年经历应使用过去时），而且“read”和后面关于18岁的内容不清楚，影响理解。建议只保留与问题相关的信息，并用一到两个具体细节说明你是否常骑车或骑得怎么样。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood, although I wasn't very good at it.

Gợi ý: 你提到了自己所在的地方以及道路较窄这一具体观察，但开头的观点不够明确，语法也不自然，例如“not much people”应改为“not many people”。建议先直接回答整体看法，再用当地情况解释，并使用连接词让理由更清楚。

Ví dụ: I think bikes are fairly popular in some parts of my country, but not so much in Lanzhou. For example, not many people in my area cycle because the roads are quite narrow.

× I have a small bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a small bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，时间在过去，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。

× I read not very well.

✓ I couldn't ride very well.

结合前文谈论自行车，这里可能想表达“我骑得不太好”。表达过去的能力时可用 couldn't；骑自行车应使用 ride，而不是 read。若原意并非“骑车”，请根据实际意思调整。

× Um when I ate when I 18 years old I study

✓ Um, when I was 18 years old, I studied.

句子描述过去的年龄和经历，应使用过去时：I 后面需要 was，study 应改为 studied。原句中的 ate 与上下文含义不清，因此未保留；请确认这里是否为转写错误。

× It's not very not much people to ride bike.

✓ Not many people ride bikes.

people 是可数名词复数，表示“人数不多”时应使用 many，而不是 much。原句中的 not very not much 也重复表达了否定，删去重复部分即可。

× It's not very not much people to ride bike.

✓ Not many people ride bikes.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，bike 应使用复数 bikes。英语中泛指一类事物时，通常可以使用复数形式。