Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. It was a study little bike that my parents bought bought me, and I used to ride it to the park with my friends every weekend.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

It was popular as before, but when people get more money and they all buy the car or electric bike, no one rides bike anymore.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,并提供了颜色、购买者和骑车地点等具体细节,结构也清楚。注意“study”应为“sturdy”(结实的),且“bought”重复了一次。可以在回答后补充一个具体感受,让内容更自然丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. It was a sturdy little bike that my parents bought me, and I used to ride it to the park with my friends every weekend. I always looked forward to those rides.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了自行车受欢迎程度下降的观点,也给出了原因,但语法和表达不够自然。“It was popular as before”可改为“Bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be”;谈普遍情况时用现在时,并注意复数和冠词,例如“cars”“ride bikes”。避免绝对化的“no one”,可用“fewer people”。

Ví dụ: Bikes aren’t as popular as they used to be in my country. As people become more affluent, many choose to drive cars or use electric bikes instead. However, some people still ride traditional bikes for exercise or short trips.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It was a study little bike that my parents bought bought me.

✓ It was a sturdy little bike that my parents bought me.

这里的 study 不是合适的形容词;根据语境,描述自行车结实耐用应使用 sturdy(结实的)。另外,bought 重复出现属于口语中的重复,不是本题所列的语法问题类型,因此不作为单独语法错误说明。

25: Comparative and superlative errors

× It was popular as before, but when people get more money and they all buy the car or electric bike, no one rides bike anymore.

✓ Bikes used to be more popular, but as people have become wealthier and bought cars or electric bikes, no one rides bikes anymore.

原句中的 as before 没有构成正确的比较结构。比较“过去更受欢迎”与“现在的情况”时,可以说 used to be more popular。

1: Singular and plural issue

× It was popular as before, but when people get more money and they all buy the car or electric bike, no one rides bike anymore.

✓ Bikes used to be more popular, but as people have become wealthier and bought cars or electric bikes, no one rides bikes anymore.

这里是在泛指汽车、电动自行车和自行车,应该使用复数形式:cars、electric bikes 和 bikes。单数可数名词不能在这种泛指用法中直接单独出现。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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