Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike and the bike war was MMM by by my parents because they wanted me to go to school by bike and I really like riding bikes.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Definitely. And there I think there are two reasons. Firstly, the government encourages people to go to work or go to school by bike because it may reduce the carbon dioxide the second day. I think it's very convenient.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答,再补充一个具体原因或感受。注意过去时:描述童年经历时用“liked”;“was ... by my parents”应改为“was bought by my parents”。避免重复“bike”,并减少停顿和自我重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike because they wanted me to ride to school. I really enjoyed cycling, especially on sunny days.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确,但需要让理由表达完整、逻辑更清楚。“the second day”不符合此处语意,可改为“carbon emissions”。第二个理由可以具体说明骑车为什么方便,例如避开堵车或适合短途出行;同时避免用“And there”开头。

Ví dụ: Definitely. I think bikes are popular for two main reasons. First, cycling produces fewer carbon emissions, so the government encourages people to commute by bike. Also, it’s convenient for short journeys because cyclists can often avoid traffic jams.

Ngữ pháp

21: Incorrect passive voice(被动语态错误)

× the bike war was MMM by by my parents

✓ the bike was bought by my parents

这里描述自行车是父母买的,应用被动语态“was bought”。被动语态的结构是“be动词 + 过去分词”;“buy”的过去分词是“bought”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I really like riding bikes.

✓ I really liked riding bikes.

这句话描述的是童年时期的喜好,语境是过去,因此应将一般现在时“like”改为一般过去时“liked”。

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