Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because all my family is not umm. Uh, a real wealthy family. So when I'm a kid, my parents can't afford the umm.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do think so, because nowadays people. Umm, people like to ride bikes when they are work or go to go to work or go to school.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答,再用完整、自然的句子解释原因。注意过去时态:谈童年时用“when I was a child”和“couldn’t afford”,而不是“when I’m a kid”和“can’t afford”。“My family wasn’t very wealthy”比“all my family is not a real wealthy family”更自然。结尾应说清楚父母买不起什么,例如“a bike”,并尽量减少停顿词。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family wasn’t very wealthy, so my parents couldn’t afford one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答方向正确,但“when they are work”语法不正确,应该说“when they go to work”或“on their way to work”。避免重复“go to go”,并用一个具体理由补充说明,例如骑车通勤方便、经济或环保。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because all my family is not umm. Uh, a real wealthy family.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn't very wealthy.

这段话描述的是童年时期的情况,因此应使用过去时。将“is not”改为“wasn't”。此外,“real wealthy”在这里不符合标准英语表达,可改为“very wealthy”。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× So when I'm a kid, my parents can't afford the umm.

✓ So when I was a kid, my parents couldn't afford one.

句子谈论的是过去的童年经历,因此“I'm”应改为“was”,“can't”应改为过去形式“couldn't”。“afford”后需要说明买不起什么;这里用“one”代指前文提到的自行车。

10: Verb in the present participle form(现在分词形式错误)

× People like to ride bikes when they are work or go to go to work or go to school.

✓ People like to ride bikes when they go to work or school.

“they are work”中的“are”后不能直接接动词原形“work”;若使用进行时,应说“are going”。这里表达日常习惯,用一般现在时“they go”更自然。“go to go to”是重复表达,删除多余的“go to”即可。

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