Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did. My father bought me a small pink bike when I was five, and I often rode it with my friends after class. I used to practice riding every weekend until I feel confident to ride without training wheels.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bicycles have become more popular in recent years. Firstly, cycling is a healthy option and a good way to keep fit. I override my bike to a nearby park after dinner. Secondly, it's an eco friendly and convenient way to commute. And many people use bikes for short journey to work or the shops.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且细节具体,提到了自行车的颜色、购买时间和骑车场景。注意时态一致:讲过去的经历时,应把“feel”改为“felt”。“practice riding”也可以换成更自然的“practice riding it”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a small pink bike when I was five, and I often rode it with my friends after school. I practiced riding it every weekend until I felt confident enough to ride without training wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,并用健康和通勤两个理由展开,结构较清楚。不过,“I override my bike”表达错误,应改为“I ride my bike”;“eco friendly”应写作“eco-friendly”;“short journey”应改为复数“short journeys”。避免用“And”单独开始句子,并可补充具体场景,让支持细节更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles have become more popular in recent years. Cycling is a healthy way to keep fit, and I often ride my bike to a nearby park after dinner. It is also an eco-friendly and convenient way to travel. For example, many people cycle to work or to local shops when the journey is short.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× I used to practice riding every weekend until I feel confident to ride without training wheels.

✓ I used to practice riding every weekend until I felt confident to ride without training wheels.

句子描述的是过去的经历,前面的“used to practice”也表明语境在过去,因此“feel”应改为过去式“felt”,与整句时态保持一致。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× And many people use bikes for short journey to work or the shops.

✓ And many people use bikes for short journeys to work or the shops.

“many people”表示许多人,后面说的是他们通勤或去商店时使用自行车的普遍情况,因此这里应使用可数名词复数“journeys”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Fit— Suitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Healthy— Well; Health-giving
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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