Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-10-27 19:16:10

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did have a bite when I was a child. It was around um when I was in my middle school and I had to

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, buys are very popular in the country. In the city center, children are often used buys to go to schools or as a tool of playing entertainment and in the country uh not only children is buys uh but

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then complete your thought with a relevant detail. Correct “bite” to “bike,” and avoid fillers such as “um.” Your answer is unfinished, so explain what you did with the bike or why you had it. Use no more than a few clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was in middle school. I used it to ride around my neighborhood and visit my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with one or two complete, specific points. Correct “buys” to “bikes,” and use natural phrasing such as “children often use bikes to get to school.” Avoid the unclear phrase “a tool of playing entertainment,” and finish your contrast about who rides bikes in the countryside. Use a linking word such as “also” or “while.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In cities, children often ride them to school or for fun, while people in rural areas use them for short trips and daily errands.

Ngữ pháp

21: Incorrect passive voice

× In the city center, children are often used buys to go to schools or as a tool of playing entertainment.

✓ In the city center, children often use bikes to go to school or for entertainment.

The original uses a passive construction, are often used, which makes it sound as if someone uses the children. The children are the people doing the action, so use the active form often use. In the sense of attending school, go to school is the natural expression. For entertainment is also a more appropriate phrase here.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× In the country, not only children is buys ...

✓ In the countryside, not only children use bikes ...

Children is plural, so it cannot agree with the singular verb is. Use a plural verb, such as use. The transcript ends mid-sentence, so this correction only repairs the grammar in the available portion.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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