Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I enjoyed it very much. I didn't know how to ride a bike at first, but my father teach me how to ride one and I've learned. I enjoyed it and I liked it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in our country. There are mountain bikes, small bikes, other BMX type. Others like the mountain bike. They try to customize it and all. That's why it's really popular, because there are many riders here.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about learning to ride or using the bike. Use the past tense consistently: say “my father taught me” and “I learned.” Avoid repeating that you enjoyed and liked it; one expression is enough.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it. At first, I couldn’t ride it, so my father taught me in a park near our home. After a few days of practice, I learned how to balance and ride on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain which types of bikes are popular and why. Avoid sentence fragments such as “other BMX type” and the unclear pronoun “they”; use complete sentences and specific linking words such as “for example” or “because.” Reduce repetition by combining your points into a short, coherent response.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially mountain bikes and BMX bikes. For example, many young people customize their bikes and ride them with friends. I think this hobby is popular because it’s an enjoyable way to exercise and spend time outdoors.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I didn't know how to ride a bike at first, but my father teach me how to ride one and I've learned.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike at first, but my father taught me how to ride one, and I learned.

The sentence describes events in the past, so use the past forms taught and learned. Use learned how to ride one to make clear what skill you acquired.

1: Singular and plural issue

× There are mountain bikes, small bikes, other BMX type.

✓ There are mountain bikes, small bikes, and other BMX types.

The phrase lists multiple kinds of bikes, so the countable noun type should be plural: types. Keep the items in the list parallel by adding and before the final item.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× Others like the mountain bike.

✓ Others like mountain bikes.

When referring to mountain bikes as a general category, do not use the definite article the. Use the plural noun without an article.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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