Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I did have a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it, um, visiting around my house, my home, you know, visiting other relatives.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes. Uh, riding a bike is very popular in China. Um, for example, I I'm living in Beijing and every day you can uh, in the morning or in rush hours you can see a lot of people riding bikes to to go to work.
Đánh giá
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Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 直接回答后无需重复“I did have a bike”。“visiting around my house”表达不自然；如果想说骑车在家附近转转，可以说“ride around my neighborhood”。之后可以补充一个具体场景，例如骑车去亲戚家。尽量减少“um”和“you know”等填充语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike around my neighborhood after school, and sometimes I cycled to visit relatives who lived nearby.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答切题，也提供了北京通勤的例子。建议用“Yes, definitely”直接表达观点，并将“I’m living in Beijing”改为更自然的“I live in Beijing”；“in rush hours”改为“during rush hour”。减少重复和填充语，并把例子组织成连贯的一两句话。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Cycling is quite popular in China. I live in Beijing, and during the morning rush hour, I often see many people riding bikes to work.
Ngữ pháp
× I usually rode it, um, visiting around my house, my home, you know, visiting other relatives.
✓ I usually rode it around my neighborhood and visited other relatives.
“rode it”后面直接接“visiting around my house”使句子结构和动作之间的关系不清楚，而且“visit around my house”搭配不自然。可以用并列结构“rode ... and visited ...”表达两个过去常做的动作，并将地点表达为“rode it around my neighborhood”。
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