Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I do have multiple bikes when I was in my a dozen time. Uh, usually they contain the road boy can a regular bike and both with the brand. Giant is a Taiwanese brand of bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country, but nowadays not too many young people were. Older generations use bike to commute, more use public bikes.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “Yes, I did” rather than “Yes, I do.” The phrases “in my a dozen time” and “road boy can” are unclear, so use simple, accurate language to say how many bikes you had and what types they were. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode them. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had two bikes when I was a child. One was a road bike, and the other was a regular bike; they were both made by Giant, a Taiwanese brand. I often rode them around my neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain the difference between age groups clearly. Use “are” or “ride” for current habits instead of “were,” and say “bikes” or “a bike” rather than “bike” when needed. The final point about public bikes is unclear; explain who uses them or how they are used. Link your ideas with a phrase such as “whereas” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, although fewer young people ride them regularly nowadays. Older people often use bikes to commute, whereas many city residents use public bike-sharing schemes for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I do have multiple bikes when I was in my a dozen time.

✓ Yes, I did have multiple bikes when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use did rather than do. The phrase in my a dozen time is not a grammatical way to refer to childhood; in this context, say when I was a child.

Present tense issue

× I think yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country, but nowadays not too many young people were.

✓ I think so. Bikes are definitely popular in my country, but nowadays not too many young people ride them.

Nowadays refers to the present, so were is the wrong tense here. Use a present-tense verb such as ride to complete the idea.

Singular and plural issue

× Older generations use bike to commute, more use public bikes.

✓ Older generations use bikes to commute, and more of them use public bikes.

Bike is a countable noun used generally here, so it should be plural: bikes. The phrase more of them makes clear that more people use public bikes.

Sentence structure errors

× Older generations use bike to commute, more use public bikes.

✓ Older generations use bikes to commute, and more of them use public bikes.

The original joins two independent ideas with only a comma. Join them with and, or separate them into two sentences.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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