Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike but it was on in my childhood and I have been alone. Haven't been a long time to ride a bike. Uh, I yes.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in at the weekend I can also see a lot of people riding bike around the lake and in the morning there are many people go to work on by bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答意思不够清楚,且时态和句子结构有较多错误。先直接说明小时候是否有自行车,再补充一个具体细节;谈过去时使用过去式,例如“had”,并避免重复或未完成的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends, but I haven't ridden a bike for years.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,也提供了周末和早晨的例子,但有一些语法和搭配错误。开头直接回答观点;说“周末”可用“at weekends”,说“骑自行车”用“ride bikes”,并将“there are many people go”改为“many people go”或“there are many people who go”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. At weekends, I often see people riding bikes around the lake, and many commuters cycle to work in the morning.
× Yes, I have a bike
✓ Yes, I had a bike
问题问的是你小时候的情况,因此应使用一般过去时。这里的 have 应改为过去式 had。
× Haven't been a long time to ride a bike.
✓ I haven't ridden a bike for a long time.
表达“很久没有骑自行车”时,可用现在完成时 haven't + 过去分词,因此 ride 应改为过去分词 ridden。句子还需要主语 I,并用 for a long time 表示持续的时间。
× in at the weekend
✓ at the weekend
at the weekend 已经是完整的时间表达,不需要再加 in。
× a lot of people riding bike around the lake
✓ a lot of people riding bikes around the lake
这里泛指人们骑自行车,通常使用可数名词 bike 的复数形式 bikes。
× there are many people go to work
✓ there are many people who go to work
there are many people 后面不能直接接谓语 go。可以加关系代词 who,组成 who go to work 来修饰 people。
× on by bike
✓ by bike
by bike 表示“骑自行车”,这里不需要再加 on。