Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I was child I had a bike because I like riding. It feels so happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course. Uh, in my city, I live this city, it's no motorcycle. People always ride bikes when they. Don't work or go home.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用正确的时态和句型:说童年经历时用过去时,例如“when I was a child”和“I liked riding”;表达感受时可说“It made me feel happy”。还可以补充骑车的地点或用途,让回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood after school, and it always made me feel happy.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎,再用完整句子说明原因。避免重复“I live in this city”,并把“it's no motorcycle”改成准确表达,例如“there aren't many motorbikes”。注意句子不要中断;可以说明人们在什么情况下骑车,例如上下班或短途出行,并用“because”连接理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my city. There aren't many motorbikes, so people often ride bicycles to work or when they go home. They are also a convenient way to get around for short trips.
× When I was child
✓ When I was a child
child是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。这里应在child前加不定冠词a。
× because I like riding
✓ because I liked riding
这句话是在回忆小时候的经历,因此描述当时喜欢骑车时,宜使用过去式liked。
× It feels so happy.
✓ I felt so happy.
happy描述人的感受,不能自然地用来描述自行车或骑车这件事。应使用I作为感受者;由于是在回忆过去,动词也应使用过去式felt。
× I live this city
✓ I live in this city
表示居住在某个城市时,live后需要加介词in,再接城市名称或this city。
× it's no motorcycle
✓ there are no motorcycles
表示某处“没有……”时,应使用there be句型,不能用it is来表达存在。此处可说there are no motorcycles。
× it's no motorcycle
✓ there are no motorcycles
这里是在泛指当地没有摩托车,motorcycle应使用复数motorcycles,并与there are搭配。
× People always ride bikes when they. Don't work or go home.
✓ People always ride bikes when they don't work or go home.
when引导的时间从句不能在they后被句号拆开;“Don't work or go home”因此成为不完整的句子。应将从句连接起来,并将don't小写。