Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was child I had a bike because I like riding. It feels so happy.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, of course. Uh, in my city, I live this city, it's no motorcycle. People always ride bikes when they. Don't work or go home.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用正确的时态和句型:说童年经历时用过去时,例如“when I was a child”和“I liked riding”;表达感受时可说“It made me feel happy”。还可以补充骑车的地点或用途,让回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood after school, and it always made me feel happy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 先清楚回答自行车是否受欢迎,再用完整句子说明原因。避免重复“I live in this city”,并把“it's no motorcycle”改成准确表达,例如“there aren't many motorbikes”。注意句子不要中断;可以说明人们在什么情况下骑车,例如上下班或短途出行,并用“because”连接理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my city. There aren't many motorbikes, so people often ride bicycles to work or when they go home. They are also a convenient way to get around for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× When I was child

✓ When I was a child

child是可数名词单数,前面通常需要冠词。这里应在child前加不定冠词a。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× because I like riding

✓ because I liked riding

这句话是在回忆小时候的经历,因此描述当时喜欢骑车时,宜使用过去式liked。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs(形容词或副词使用错误)

× It feels so happy.

✓ I felt so happy.

happy描述人的感受,不能自然地用来描述自行车或骑车这件事。应使用I作为感受者;由于是在回忆过去,动词也应使用过去式felt。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× I live this city

✓ I live in this city

表示居住在某个城市时,live后需要加介词in,再接城市名称或this city。

3: There be issue(There be句型错误)

× it's no motorcycle

✓ there are no motorcycles

表示某处“没有……”时,应使用there be句型,不能用it is来表达存在。此处可说there are no motorcycles。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× it's no motorcycle

✓ there are no motorcycles

这里是在泛指当地没有摩托车,motorcycle应使用复数motorcycles,并与there are搭配。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× People always ride bikes when they. Don't work or go home.

✓ People always ride bikes when they don't work or go home.

when引导的时间从句不能在they后被句号拆开;“Don't work or go home”因此成为不完整的句子。应将从句连接起来,并将don't小写。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Happy— Cheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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