Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike. When I was a child it was a gift from my mom on my birthday.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

From my perspective, I think bikes are really popular in my country, especially during the rush hour. Many commuters tend to ride bicycle to their workplace.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也用生日礼物补充了具体信息。注意时态一致:问题问的是童年经历,应将“I have”改为“I had”或“I received”。另外,可把两句衔接得更自然,并避免重复表达“小时候”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom gave it to me for my birthday, and I rode it around our neighborhood quite often.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接表达了观点,并用通勤情况作为支持细节。开头“From my perspective”和“I think”意思重复,保留其中一个即可。注意单数可数名词前需要冠词,或改用复数“bicycles”;“their workplaces”也更适合泛指不同通勤者的工作地点。可以补充一个具体原因,让回答更充分。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially during rush hour. Many people cycle to work because it can be quicker than driving in heavy traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

问题问的是你小时候是否有自行车,时间背景是过去,因此应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× From my perspective, I think bikes are really popular in my country, especially during the rush hour.

✓ From my perspective, I think bikes are really popular in my country, especially during rush hour.

这里泛指“上下班高峰时段”,通常说“during rush hour”,不需要在“rush hour”前加定冠词“the”。

Singular and plural issue

× Many commuters tend to ride bicycle to their workplace.

✓ Many commuters tend to ride bicycles to their workplace.

“Many commuters”指许多通勤者,句子表达的是他们通常骑自行车这一普遍情况,因此“bicycle”应使用复数“bicycles”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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