Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course, when I was young my mom bought a bike to me it was a blue and new with two UMM with four wheels.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Definitely buy case are very useful Welcome, but in my country it's a mountain city. It's not usually the the in other city because the.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用自然的表达:应说“bought me a bike”或“bought a bike for me”,而不是“bought a bike to me”;描述颜色和新旧时可说“a new blue bike”。“four wheels”与普通自行车不符;如果你想表达辅助轮,可以说“training wheels”。避免停顿词,并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a new blue bike when I was a child. It had training wheels, which helped me learn how to ride.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,然后用完整句子解释原因。你提到了自行车很实用,以及当地多山,这两个观点可以用“but”连接;请说明多山如何影响骑行,并用“as popular as”进行比较。避免重复词和未完成的句子。

Ví dụ: Bikes are useful, but they aren’t very popular in my country. Many cities are quite mountainous, so cycling can be tiring. As a result, bikes are less common here than in flatter cities.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× When I was young, my mom bought a bike to me.

✓ When I was young, my mom bought a bike for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时,通常用“buy something for someone”,所以这里应将“to me”改为“for me”。也可以说“my mom bought me a bike”。

1: Singular and plural issue

× It's not usually the the in other city because the.

✓ It's not usually the case in other cities because ...

如果是在泛指其他城市,应使用复数“cities”,而不是单数“city”。不过原句后半部分内容不完整,无法在不猜测原意的情况下进一步修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Useful— Functional; Beneficial
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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