Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

To tell you the truth, yes, I did. Actually, my father was one of my biggest supporters. He engaged me to learn bike as a professional support and um

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Actually, I do think bikes are popular in my country. I have seen many people who they who are encouraged in um riding a bike to go to school, go to work, etc.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about who taught you or how you used the bike. Use the natural phrase “taught me to ride a bike” rather than “engaged me to learn bike,” and finish your thought instead of trailing off.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father taught me to ride a bike when I was about six, and he encouraged me as I practised in our neighborhood. I loved riding it with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give your opinion without repeating “actually,” then support it with a specific observation. Correct the sentence structure: say “many people ride bikes” or “many people are encouraged to ride bikes,” and replace “etc.” with a concrete example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students ride them to school, while some adults use them to commute to work. They’re affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× He engaged me to learn bike as a professional support and um

✓ He engaged me to learn to ride a bike as a professional support and um

The singular countable noun bike needs an article, and the usual grammatical construction is learn to ride a bike. Use to + base verb after learn when describing an activity you are learning to do.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Actually, I do think bikes are popular in my country. I have seen many people who they who are encouraged in um riding a bike to go to school, go to work, etc.

✓ Actually, I do think bikes are popular in my country. I have seen many people who are encouraged in um riding a bike to go to school, go to work, etc.

The relative pronoun who already refers to people and functions as the subject of the relative clause, so the extra subject pronoun they is unnecessary. Use who only once to introduce the clause.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually, I do think bikes are popular in my country. I have seen many people who they who are encouraged in um riding a bike to go to school, go to work, etc.

✓ Actually, I do think bikes are popular in my country. I have seen many people who are encouraged to ride a bike to go to school, go to work, etc.

The usual construction is be encouraged to do something, not be encouraged in doing something. Use to followed by the base form of the verb, such as to ride.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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