Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a ch- bike when I was a child. Um, my parents bought it for me and encouraged me to be more athletic.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei. We had U-Bike and it's easy to ride a bike with our card which can be used in various ways.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,也补充了父母买车的原因。注意避免“ch-”“Um”等明显停顿,直接说“a bike”即可。还可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑,让回答更生动。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me because they wanted me to be more active. I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 观点明确,也提到了台北的公共自行车,但“especially I live in Taipei”语法不自然,可改为“especially in Taipei”。如果描述目前的情况,应使用现在时“there is/are”,而不是“We had”。“a card which can be used in various ways”表达含糊,可以具体说明用悠游卡或手机租车,并补充骑车受欢迎的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Taiwan, especially in Taipei. The city has a public bike-sharing system called YouBike, which is convenient and affordable. People can unlock a bike with a transit card or a mobile app, so it’s easy to use for short trips.
× Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially I live in Taipei.
✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where I live.
“Especially”后面不能直接接“I live in Taipei”这样的完整分句。这里可以用介词短语“especially in Taipei”(尤其是在台北),再用“where I live”补充说明台北是说话者居住的地方。