Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's a most popular vehicle in my country. The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, and use the past tense because you are talking about childhood: say “I had,” not “I have.” Add the article “a” before “child.” You could also include one specific detail, such as how often you rode it or where you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more natural. Use “one of the most popular forms of transport” rather than “a most popular vehicle,” and say “many people in rural areas ride bikes to the market.” Replace “for processing” with the activity you mean, such as shopping or buying groceries. Give one specific reason or example, and avoid repeating the subject (“people, they”).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people ride them to the local market because they are affordable and convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense form had instead of have.

22: Article errors

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a before child.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, it's a most popular vehicle in my country.

✓ Yes, it's the most popular vehicle in my country.

Use the before a superlative adjective such as most popular, not a.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

Maximum does not work as a quantifier in this sentence. Use most to mean the majority of people.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

Use in the village to describe where the people live. The original phrase of village uses the wrong preposition and is missing the article the.

26: Sentence structure errors

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

The subject is repeated in the original: people is followed by they. Use one subject, as in Most people ride bikes.

6: Present tense issue

× The maximum people of village, they are riding by bike and going to market for processing.

✓ Most people in the village ride bikes and go to the market for shopping.

The sentence describes a general habit, so use the present simple ride and go rather than the present continuous are riding and going.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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