Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two clear details. Use “a small pink bicycle” rather than “a small pinky bike sickle,” and avoid restarting phrases such as “my mom my mother’s.” Keep the verb tense consistent: use past tense for childhood memories (“loved,” “went out”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bicycle when I was five; it was a birthday present from my mother. I loved it and often rode it whenever I went out.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with clear, specific reasons. Say “popular” rather than “famous,” and use “bicycles are environmentally friendly.” Avoid describing Vietnam as “not really a developed country”; you could say that bicycles are an affordable and practical way to travel. Check subject–verb agreement (“many people ride”) and remove hesitations and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Vietnam, especially for short trips. Many people use them because they are affordable and help reduce pollution. They are also convenient in busy areas.

× I had a very pretty small pinky bike sickle when I was five years old.

✓ I had a very pretty small pink bicycle when I was five years old.

Adjectives usually follow the order opinion, size, and color. Pretty (opinion) should come before small (size), which should come before pink (color).

× ...which and it was my mom my mother's birthday gift...

✓ ...which was my mother's birthday gift...

Do not use which and it together to introduce the same relative clause. Use which was, and remove the repeated wording before mother's birthday gift.

× ...and I love it so much that I always took it with me whenever I go out I went out.

✓ ...and I loved it so much that I always took it with me whenever I went out.

The answer describes a childhood experience, so the past-tense verbs loved and went are consistent with took. The final went out appears to be a self-correction; use it once.

× ...I think bicycle is very famous in Vietnam...

✓ ...I think bicycles are very famous in Vietnam...

Use the plural bicycles when speaking about bicycles in general. The verb must also agree with this plural subject, so use are.

× ...and there is a lot of people still riding a bike to go out...

✓ ...and there are a lot of people still riding bikes to go out...

In a there is/are construction, the verb agrees with the noun that follows. People is plural, so use there are.

× ...and also bicycle is very environmental friendly.

✓ ...and bicycles are also very environmentally friendly.

Environmentally is an adverb modifying the adjective friendly. Environmental is an adjective and does not correctly modify friendly here. Bicycles is plural because the statement refers to bicycles in general.