Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, because my parents thought cycling is too dangerous in our busy neighborhood. But my friend usually showed me their bicycles and invited me to ride. And that made me feel happy.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I think bikes are quite popular among young people in our country because they are cheap and convenient. Many students write bikes to school for short juniors and cycling is also seen as healthy eco-friendly and cost

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了父母不让你骑车的原因和朋友带来的感受。注意时态一致:讲童年往事时,用“was”而不是“is”;“invited me to ride”可以补充宾语,让表达更自然。连接词“And”放在句首略显生硬,可改为“So”。

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought cycling was too dangerous in our busy neighborhood. However, one of my friends often showed me their bike and invited me to have a ride, which always made me happy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 43.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接回答了问题,也提到了价格和便利性,但后半段有明显用词错误或识别不清(如“write bikes”“short juniors”),最后一句也没有说完。请确认想表达的是“ride bikes”“short journeys”,并用连接词串联理由;可以补全骑行环保、经济等优点,但控制在五句以内。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular among young people in my country because they’re affordable and convenient. Many students ride to school, especially when they only have a short journey. Cycling is also a healthy and eco-friendly way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Actually I didn't have a bike when I was a child, because my parents thought cycling is too dangerous in our busy neighborhood.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought cycling was too dangerous in our busy neighborhood.

主句使用过去时“thought”,描述的是父母当时的想法,因此后面的宾语从句也应使用过去时“was”,而不是“is”。建议叙述过去发生的事情或过去的想法时,检查从句中的动词是否需要与过去时保持一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Dangerous— Menacing; Hazardous
Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
Happy— Cheerful; Glad; Fortunate
Healthy— Well; Health-giving
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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