Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had a bike when I was 11 years old. I go to school by a bike every day
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's very popular in my country. Uh, I went to school every day by bike, and it's very fast. and it's very easy.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也提供了骑车上学的具体信息。不过,第二句应使用过去时,因为你在谈童年经历;“by a bike”不自然,建议说“by bike”或“ride my bike”。可以补充一个简短细节,让回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was 11. I rode it to school every day, which was a convenient way to get around.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你明确表达了看法,但“it's”指代不清,应改为“they're”来指代自行车。后面的个人经历没有充分说明自行车在整个国家是否普及,而且“fast”和“easy”较笼统;可以提到常见的骑车人群或骑车的实际好处,并用连接词组织理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They’re affordable and convenient, and they’re often a good way to avoid traffic.
× I had a bike when I was 11 years old. I go to school by a bike every day
✓ I had a bike when I was 11 years old. I went to school by bike every day.
这段话是在描述童年时期的经历,语境是过去,因此应将一般现在时 go 改为一般过去时 went。
× I had a bike when I was 11 years old. I go to school by a bike every day
✓ I had a bike when I was 11 years old. I went to school by bike every day.
表示乘坐某种交通工具时,by 后通常直接接交通工具名称,不加冠词。因此应说 by bike,而不是 by a bike。也可以说 on a bike。
× Yes, it's very popular in my country.
✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.
问题问的是复数名词 bikes,回答时应使用复数代词 they,而不是单数代词 it;相应地,be 动词也应使用 are。