Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, in the age of junior school, I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because I can sing. Many people will buy a bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,但“in the age of junior school”表达不自然,而且谈过去的经历应使用过去时“had”,而不是“have”。可以直接说明你小时候是否有自行车,再补充一个具体细节,例如何时骑车或通常在哪里骑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,并用复数“bikes”或“cycling”表达自行车很受欢迎。“because I can sing”与问题无关,建议改为说明自行车受欢迎的原因,例如方便、便宜或环保。“Many people will buy a bike”不够具体,也不自然地表达了普遍现象;可以改为“many people use bikes”并补充相关场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, so many people use them to commute or run errands.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, in the age of junior school, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior school, I had a bike.

“in the age of junior school”不是自然、正确的表达。可以说“when I was in junior school”(我上初中时)。

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, in the age of junior school, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior school, I had a bike.

问题问的是小时候是否有自行车,指过去的经历,因此应将现在时“have”改为过去式“had”。回答过去发生的事情时,要使用一般过去时。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because I can sing.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I can sing.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数“bikes”,并将与之搭配的“is”改为“are”。泛指可数名词时,通常使用复数形式。

7: Future tense issue(将来时错误)

× Many people will buy a bike.

✓ Many people buy bikes.

这里是在说明自行车目前是否受欢迎,表达一般情况应使用一般现在时“buy”,而不是表示将来行为的“will buy”。泛指人们通常会做的事时,可使用一般现在时。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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