Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I have the child, I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so because my hometown, it is so out late.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。注意谈论童年经历时使用过去时;“when I have the child”表达不自然,应说“when I was a child”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a little red one, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容需要更清楚,并且问题问的是整个国家,不宜只用家乡情况作为依据。说明自行车是否流行,并补充具体原因;注意使用自然、准确的表达,避免“my hometown, it is...”这样的重复结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, although many people in large cities prefer public transport.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, when I have the child, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历,应使用过去时。这里应将 “have” 改为 “was”,将 “have a bike” 改为 “had a bike”。另外,表达“当我还是个孩子时”应说 “when I was a child”,而不是 “when I have the child”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× No, I don't think so because my hometown, it is so out late.

✓ No, I don't think so because my hometown is so out late.

“my hometown” 已经是从句的主语,后面再加 “it” 会造成主语重复。删去 “it”,并让 “my hometown” 直接连接谓语。注意:“out late” 作为对家乡的描述不太自然;如果你想表达家乡很偏远,可以说 “remote”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Late— Behind schedule; Dead; Behind schedule; After hours
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