Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was 14 years old. And I do like playing bikes when when it comes in in in the yard and in the roadside. Yep.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Um yes, but uh, it has a difference on the urban and and the countryside area so it mostly popular in the city or the town but not too much in my in my

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: use “I had,” not “I do have.” Say “ride a bike” rather than “play bikes,” and avoid repeating words such as “when” and “in.” Add one clear detail about where or how often you rode it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was 14. I often rode it in the yard and along the road near my home, especially after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Give a complete answer and finish your thought. Use “there is a difference between urban and rural areas” and include the missing verb in “they are popular.” Explain why bikes are more or less common in each place, and avoid fillers and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, although their use varies between urban and rural areas. They are common in cities for commuting, but people in the countryside may rely more on motorbikes or cars for longer journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was 14 years old.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 14 years old.

The question refers to a time in the past, so use the simple past form had rather than the present-tense form do have.

5: Past tense issue

× I do like playing bikes when when it comes in in in the yard and in the roadside.

✓ I liked riding my bike in the yard and on the roadside.

Because the answer describes the student's childhood, use the past-tense form liked. The phrase when it comes is unclear in this context, so it is omitted; use riding a bike to express the intended activity.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I do like playing bikes when when it comes in in in the yard and in the roadside.

✓ I liked riding my bike in the yard and on the roadside.

Use in for an enclosed or defined area such as a yard, but use on in the phrase on the roadside.

3: There be issue

× It has a difference on the urban and and the countryside area.

✓ There is a difference between urban and countryside areas.

Use the there is construction to state that a difference exists. The usual preposition after difference when comparing two things is between.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× It has a difference on the urban and and the countryside area.

✓ There is a difference between urban and countryside areas.

Use between to introduce the two things being compared. On is not the appropriate preposition in this expression.

1: Singular and plural issue

× The urban and and the countryside area.

✓ Urban and countryside areas.

The sentence refers to two types of areas, so use the plural noun areas.

26: Sentence structure errors

× So it mostly popular in the city or the town.

✓ So bikes are mostly popular in cities and towns.

The original clause is missing a verb before the adjective popular. Use are with the plural subject bikes to form a complete clause.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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