Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't. I had no bikes when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because mmm it is just a transport tool for us to go anywhere. So no.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但两句话表达了同一意思,显得重复。可以补充一个具体细节,例如家人为什么没有给你买自行车,或者你小时候通常怎样出行,让回答更自然、更完整。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived close to school, so I usually walked there with my parents.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点和理由,但“mmm”和“So no”会影响流畅度,而且“a transport tool for us to go anywhere”不够自然,也没有清楚说明为什么自行车不受欢迎。建议先直接回答,再具体解释人们更常选择的交通方式或原因,并使用“because”或“for example”等连接表达。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't say bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or public transport, especially when they have to travel long distances or commute in bad weather.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because mmm it is just a transport tool for us to go anywhere.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because they are just a means of transportation for us to get around.

前面提到的主语是复数“bikes”,后面用单数代词“it”指代,代词与所指对象不一致。应使用复数代词“they”。此外,“a means of transportation”是表达“交通工具/交通方式”更自然的说法。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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