Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去的经历，注意统一使用过去时：用 “I did” 而不是 “I have”，用 “learned” 和 “rode” 描述过去。表达“买了一辆红色的自行车”可说 “bought me a red one”；“骑车上学”说 “ride it to school”。最后补充一两个具体细节即可，避免重复表达喜爱，也要避免不自然的 “go to go on vacations”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. After I learned how to ride, my mother bought me a red bike. I loved it and rode it for several years, usually to school and back home. I also took it on short rides during the holidays.

Gợi ý: 先用一句话清楚回答问题，例如 “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” 不要重复“very popular”，也不要把“my country”和“many countries”混在一起。接着给出一个具体例子或原因，例如人们骑自行车通勤、锻炼，或使用共享单车。最后半句意思不清；如果想比较城市差异，请说明是哪些条件限制了骑行。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in larger cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient and affordable. However, cycling is less common in some areas where the roads are busy or there are few bike lanes.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是“Did you…?”，使用一般过去时，因此回答应使用助动词 did，而不是现在完成时的 have。回答过去时问题时，可用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”

× After I have learned how to ride a bike, my mother bought it for me, a red one.

✓ After I learned how to ride a bike, my mother bought one for me—a red one.

这句话描述童年时发生的一连串过去事件，learn 和 buy 都应使用一般过去时。将“have learned”改为“learned”，并用“one”指代前面提到的自行车，表达更清楚。讲述过去经历时，要保持相关动作的时态一致。

× And I ride it for several years after I got it.

✓ And I rode it for several years after I got it.

“got”表示过去发生的事情，骑车这件事也发生在过去，因此应将一般现在时“ride”改为一般过去时“rode”。描述过去持续了一段时间的活动时，可使用一般过去时。

× I ride it to schools and returned home and go to go on vacations.

✓ I rode it to school, returned home, and went on vacation.

这句话讲的是小时候的经历，动作应统一使用一般过去时：ride 改为 rode，go 改为 went。并列动作的时态应保持一致。

× I ride it to schools and returned home and go to go on vacations.

✓ I rode it to school, returned home, and went on vacation.

这里表达的是骑车去上学这一日常活动，通常使用固定表达“go/ride to school”，school 用单数且不加冠词。注意区分泛指上学的“school”和表示多所学校的“schools”。

× Yes, it's very popular they are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in my country.

这里谈论的是复数名词“bikes”，应使用复数代词 they 和复数动词 are。原句先用了单数“it’s”，随后又改用“they are”，造成代词不一致。回答时应让代词与所指名词的单复数保持一致。

× For example, many countries have many bikes for people to use and but many cities don't have this because their condition doesn't admit

✓ For example, many countries have many bikes for people to use, but many cities don't have this because their conditions don't allow it.

“and”和“but”不能在这里连续使用来连接同一组分句；表示转折时保留“but”即可。另外，句末的“doesn't admit”没有说明“不允许什么”，表达不完整；可用“don't allow it”补全意思。连接分句时，选择一个合适的连词，并确保后面的意思完整。

× For example, many countries have many bikes for people to use and but many cities don't have this because their condition doesn't admit

✓ For example, many countries have many bikes for people to use, but many cities don't have this because their conditions don't allow it.

原句在“doesn't admit”处结束，但 admit 在此处需要补充宾语，句意没有完整表达。可改为“don't allow it”，补出所指的内容，使原因从句完整。说完一个动词后，检查它是否需要宾语，以及句子是否已经表达完整。