Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, actually I didn't get a bike before. Uh, I wish that, but my uh my dad didn't accept he always afraid to make accidents and afraid of me just thank you

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Uh, to be to be honest, uh, I don't think that. In my country, uh, there is a lot of cars, uh, there is no ready roads for bikes, uh, there there is a lot of holes, um just

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain your father's concern in one clear supporting sentence. Use the natural phrase “I never had a bike” rather than “I didn't get a bike before,” and say “he was afraid I might have an accident.” Avoid unfinished phrases and fillers such as “just thank you.”

Ví dụ: No, I never had a bike as a child. I wish I had, but my father was worried that I might have an accident, so he didn't let me ride one.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Give a complete, direct opinion, such as “I don't think they are very popular,” and support it with the reasons you mentioned. Use “many cars,” “roads suitable for cycling,” and “potholes.” Reduce repetition and finish your response with a clear concluding idea.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. There are many cars, and most roads aren't suitable for cycling. In addition, some roads have potholes, which can make riding a bike unsafe.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× I wish that

✓ I wish I had had one.

The phrase I wish that is incomplete because it does not include the thing you wish for. To express a wish about a past situation, use wish + past perfect, such as I wish I had had one.

23: Sentence without a verb

× he always afraid to make accidents and afraid of me

✓ He was always afraid that I would have an accident and worried about me.

The original phrase is missing a verb before afraid. Use the past-tense linking verb was to describe his feelings in the past. The corrected version also makes the intended meaning clearer.

26: Sentence structure errors

× I don't think that.

✓ I don't think so.

The original ends with that but does not provide the clause that should follow it, so the thought is incomplete. Use I don't think so as a complete response when disagreeing or expressing a negative opinion.

3: There be issue

× In my country, there is a lot of cars.

✓ In my country, there are a lot of cars.

Use are with the plural noun cars in a there are construction. There is is used with a singular noun or an uncountable noun.

3: There be issue

× There is no ready roads for bikes.

✓ There are no suitable roads for bikes.

Roads is plural, so use there are rather than there is. Suitable is used here to describe roads that can be used for biking.

3: There be issue

× There there is a lot of holes.

✓ There are a lot of holes.

Use there are with the plural noun holes. Also remove the repeated there.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Ready— Completed; Willing; About to; Available; Prompt
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