Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child my mother by boat a beautiful bike for me because it's my birthday and I like my bike with my friend and 1 and I have free time, I usually go to park by bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my country bikes is very popular because it is very convenient and it can make air fresh and in my countryside people usually like the bike to go.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答“有”,再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用过去时,例如“bought”;表达“给我买了一辆自行车”应说“bought me a bike”。“在生日时”可说“for my birthday”,“和朋友骑车”可说“ride it with my friends”。避免重复表达,并将答案控制在五句话以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a beautiful bike for my birthday when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends in my free time, especially to the park.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎。注意主谓一致:“bikes are”,而不是“bikes is”。说明原因时可以说自行车方便、环保,不会造成空气污染;“make the air fresh”表达不自然,可改为“they don’t produce air pollution”。最后用具体场景补充,例如乡村居民骑车去商店或上班。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient and environmentally friendly. In the countryside, many people ride them to work or to local shops. They’re also a practical way to get around short distances.
× My mother by boat a beautiful bike for me because it's my birthday.
✓ My mother bought me a beautiful bike for my birthday.
这段话描述的是“小时候”的事情,应使用过去时。buy 的过去式是 bought;“it's my birthday”也应改为“for my birthday”,表达“作为生日礼物”。
× I like my bike with my friend and I have free time, I usually go to park by bike.
✓ I liked riding my bike with my friends. When I had free time, I usually went to the park by bike.
这里继续讲述小时候的经历,因此应使用过去时:like 改为 liked,have 改为 had,go 改为 went。讲述过去经常发生的习惯时,也可以用“usually + 动词过去式”。
× I like my bike with my friend and I have free time, I usually go to park by bike.
✓ I liked riding my bike with my friends. When I had free time, I usually went to the park by bike.
原句把多个意思用 and 连在一起,且“I have free time”与后面的“I usually go”之间用逗号连接,结构不清楚。建议拆成完整句子,或用“When...”引导时间状语从句。
× I usually go to park by bike.
✓ I usually go to the park by bike.
表示去公园时,通常说“go to the park”。park 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词;此处通常用 the。
× In my country bikes is very popular.
✓ In my country, bikes are very popular.
主语 bikes 是复数,be 动词应使用 are,而不是 is。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数,再选择相应的谓语动词。
× Bikes is very popular because it is very convenient and it can make air fresh.
✓ Bikes are very popular because they are very convenient and they can make the air fresh.
it 指代复数名词 bikes 时,代词应改为 they;相应的 be 动词也应使用 are。
× It can make air fresh.
✓ They can make the air fresh.
air 在这里指周围的空气,前面通常需要定冠词 the,因此应说“the air”。
× In my countryside people usually like the bike to go.
✓ In the countryside, people usually like riding bikes to get around.
表示“在乡下”通常说“in the countryside”,不说“in my countryside”。建议记住固定搭配“in the countryside”。
× People usually like the bike to go.
✓ People usually like riding bikes to get around.
表达“喜欢骑车”时,可以用“like + 动词-ing”,即“like riding bikes”。原句中的“the bike to go”无法表达“人们骑车出行”的意思。