Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we are living in a small neighbor and my parents they didn't find the time to book a car for me. Usually I use the car for my uh friend

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Not really. In my country people usually use regular car and I think they prefer trans uh public transport because it's easy if they want to move from place to place because sometimes the jam and traffic uh is

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give one clear reason or example. Use the past tense consistently: say “lived” rather than “are living.” “Small neighbor” is not the right expression here; use “small neighborhood.” The explanation about booking a car is unclear, so explain whether your family could not afford a bike or did not have space for one. Avoid restarting or trailing off, and keep the answer to a few complete sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small neighborhood, and my parents thought I could get around easily on foot or by car. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike, though.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and support it with a complete reason. Use plural forms such as “cars,” and say “public transport” rather than “trans public transport.” Avoid repeating “because”; connect your ideas with a linking word such as “since.” Finish the thought—for example, explain that heavy traffic makes cycling or public transport more practical.

Ví dụ: Not really. In my country, many people rely on cars and public transport because they need to travel between different parts of their city. However, cycling can be a convenient option in areas with heavy traffic, especially for short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× because we are living in a small neighbor

✓ because we were living in a small neighbor

The speaker is describing childhood, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use were living rather than are living to match that past time.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× my parents they didn't find the time

✓ my parents didn't find the time

My parents is already the subject, so the additional subject pronoun they is unnecessary. Use only one subject.

5: Past tense issue

× Usually I use the car for my uh friend

✓ Usually, I used the car for my friend.

The answer describes the speaker's childhood, so use the past-tense verb used rather than the present-tense verb use.

1: Singular and plural issue

× people usually use regular car

✓ people usually use regular cars

Regular cars refers to cars in general, so the plural form cars is appropriate. A singular countable noun would instead need an article, as in a regular car.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× because sometimes the jam and traffic uh is

✓ because sometimes the traffic jams and congestion are heavy

The subject refers to multiple traffic jams and congestion, so it takes the plural verb are, not is. The original thought also trails off; this correction completes it as a grammatical clause.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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