Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't uh little to physic physical and um basical, no basical.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In China, basic old no no lackings and Hong Kong.. Think uh basinko popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: 回答开头的“No”是直接回应,但后面的内容有较多停顿和自我纠正,意思不清楚。建议先用完整句说明原因,再补充一个具体细节;如果想表达自己当时太小或身体条件不适合骑车,请使用清晰、准确的说法,并减少重复。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I was quite young, and my parents thought I wasn't ready to ride a bike. I learned to ride one a few years later.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 12.0Gợi ý: 目前回答没有清楚表达自行车在中国是否受欢迎,关于香港的部分也难以理解。建议第一句直接表明观点,然后用具体地点或使用场景补充说明;可以用“while”或“especially”等连接词组织对比,并避免重复或含糊的词语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are popular in many parts of China, especially in smaller cities where people use them for short trips. In Hong Kong, however, cycling is less common in busy areas because the roads can be crowded.
× Think uh basinko popular.
✓ I think bikes are popular.
原句中的“Think”前缺少主语“I”,而“popular”前也需要系动词“are”。可以说“I think bikes are popular.”,即“我认为自行车很受欢迎”。原句中其他部分较难辨认,因此不对其内容作推测性修改。