Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Sure, when I was a little, my parents gave me a bag for my birthday gift and I still remember that when I read the bag I was very nervous.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think the bag is very popular in my country because because uh, we have so many Gong Xiang back in the street and everywhere.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有清楚回应“小时候有没有自行车”:你提到的是“bag(包)”,与问题中的“bike(自行车)”不符;“read the bag”也不符合语境。请先直接回答有或没有,再补充自行车是什么时候得到的、你如何使用它。注意说“when I was little”,礼物可表达为“as a birthday present”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my birthday when I was about eight, and I was really excited to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你提到了共享单车在街上很多,这是支持“自行车很受欢迎”的相关理由,但需要把“bag”改为“bikes”或“shared bikes”。“because”重复且有较多停顿,建议用一个清晰的直接回答,再说明共享单车方便、随处可见等具体原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially shared bikes. You can see them on many streets, and people often use them for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.
× when I was a little
✓ when I was little
这里的 little 是表示“年纪小”的形容词,前面不需要加冠词 a。a little 通常表示“少量的”,例如 a little water。
× my parents gave me a bag for my birthday gift
✓ my parents gave me a bag as a birthday gift
表达“把某物作为生日礼物送给某人”时,用 as a birthday gift。for my birthday gift 的介词搭配不自然;也可以说 gave me a bag for my birthday。