Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I once had a bike when I was a child. It was a birthday gift from my mother and I liked it very much. It was totally black in color and made of steel. In fact, I rode it to school every day.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially nowadays, since people's sense of Environmental Protection has greatly improved and they often tend to choose greener transportation such as bikes when they go to school or go to work. Therefore, bikes are quite popular in my country.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 84.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,并提供了礼物来源、外观和使用场景等具体细节。可以把“once had a bike when I was a child”改得更自然,例如“I had a bike as a child”;“totally black in color”略显冗长,可简化为“completely black”。还可以补充一个骑车时的感受,让回答更生动。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. It was a birthday present from my mother, and it was completely black with a sturdy steel frame. I rode it to school every day, so it was both useful and special to me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了明确观点,也给出了环保这一原因,但最后一句重复了开头的观点。建议用更自然的表达替换“people's sense of Environmental Protection has greatly improved”,例如“people have become more environmentally conscious”;“often tend to”也可简化为“often choose”。可以补充一个具体的生活场景或相关趋势,使理由更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. People have become more environmentally conscious, so many choose to cycle to work or school when the distance is manageable. Bikes are also convenient for getting around in heavy traffic.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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