Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I can riding to school or writing along the bank it's a really interesting thing

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do think bugs make an important role in our daily life. I live in a small town in China, and I can see many people ride bikes from home to work or other shops is convenient.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再补充购买时间和用途。注意讲过去经历时使用过去时;“can riding”应改为“could ride”,“writing”应为“riding”。避免把多个意思用逗号连成一个长句,可用“and”或“because”连接,并说明你为什么喜欢骑车。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was six, and I often rode it to school. I also enjoyed riding along the riverbank because it was a fun way to spend my free time.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 开头直接表明自行车在你们国家是否流行。注意“bikes”而不是“bugs”;固定搭配是“play an important role”,不是“make a role”。描述日常现象时可用“see people riding”,并补充骑车方便的具体原因,例如节省时间或便于短途出行。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in smaller towns. I often see people riding them to work or to nearby shops. They’re convenient for short trips and make it easier to get around when traffic is busy.

Ngữ pháp

4: Modal verb usage(情态动词使用错误)

× Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I can riding to school or writing along the bank it's a really interesting thing

✓ Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I could ride to school or write along the bank. It was a really interesting thing.

句子描述的是过去的经历,因此这里应使用过去式情态动词 could,而不是 can。情态动词后接动词原形,所以应说 could ride,不能说 can riding。

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I can riding to school or writing along the bank it's a really interesting thing

✓ Of course, when I was six years old, my parents bought me a bike so that I could ride to school or write along the bank. It was a really interesting thing.

这段话讲的是六岁时发生的事情。描述当时的感受时,用过去式 It was 与上下文的过去时间保持一致。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I live in a small town in China, and I can see many people ride bikes from home to work or other shops is convenient.

✓ I live in a small town in China, and I can see many people riding bikes from home to work or to other shops, which is convenient.

原句把“I can see many people ride bikes...”和“...is convenient”直接拼接在一起,导致句子结构不完整、连接不当。可用 which 引导定语从句补充说明骑车出行很方便。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Interesting— Absorbing
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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