Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I am a child. It when I was a child, it was in my 12 years old. I ride my bike to go to my middle school at morning, and the road is very crowded.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think bikes used to be popular, but now the motorcycle is more popular because our commute distance becomes farther and riding a bike is usually very exhausting.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关,但时态和句子结构问题较多,也有重复表达。回忆童年时应统一使用一般过去时,例如用“had”“rode”;将“when I was 12”作为年龄表达,并用“in the morning”描述时间。可直接回答是否有自行车,再补充骑车上学的具体经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about 12. I used to ride it to middle school in the morning, although the roads were often quite crowded.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,并用原因解释了自行车受欢迎程度下降,逻辑清楚。注意表达习惯:“motorcycles”通常用复数;“通勤距离变远”可说“commuting distances have increased”,而不是“commute distance becomes farther”。还可以补充一个具体背景,让回答更自然。

Ví dụ: Bikes used to be very popular in my country, but motorcycles are more common now. Many people have longer commutes, and cycling can be tiring, especially in hot weather.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I am a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

这句话描述的是童年时期的经历,应使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”,将“am”改为“was”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× It when I was a child, it was in my 12 years old.

✓ I got it when I was a child, when I was 12 years old.

原句开头的“It when I was a child”缺少谓语,句子结构不完整。可以补充谓语“I got”,使表达完整。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× It when I was a child, it was in my 12 years old.

✓ I got it when I was a child, when I was 12 years old.

表示年龄时直接说“when I was 12 years old”,不在年龄前使用介词“in”。避免说“in my 12 years old”。

5: Past tense issue

× I ride my bike to go to my middle school at morning, and the road is very crowded.

✓ I rode my bike to go to my middle school in the morning, and the road was very crowded.

这句话描述的是过去上学时的情况,因此动词应使用过去时:“ride”改为“rode”,“is”改为“was”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I ride my bike to go to my middle school at morning, and the road is very crowded.

✓ I rode my bike to go to my middle school in the morning, and the road was very crowded.

表示“在早上”通常用“in the morning”,而不是“at morning”。牢记常见搭配“in the morning”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Crowded— Packed
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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