Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike. When I was six, I practiced it with my friends a lot, so I can ride a bicycle very comforta comfortably now. I love riding bicycle very much. It's a good exercise.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course, bikes are very popular in my country. There are mainly bike stations for rent rental renting. So I often ride rent a bike and to commute to work or go.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节即可。注意使用自然搭配:说“learned to ride a bike”,而不是“practiced it”;“ride a bike”中的名词前要加冠词。避免重复表达喜欢骑车,并删除“comforta”这类口误;“很好的锻炼”可说“good exercise”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six and learned to ride it with my friends. I still enjoy cycling because it’s a fun way to exercise.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答方向明确,但后半部分有明显的词语重复和语法错误。可以说“bike-sharing stations”或“bikes available for rent”,并用“so”连接原因与结果。注意“ride a bike to work”或“commute to work by bike”的结构;选择其中一种表达,不要把“ride”“rent”和“to”混在一起。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. There are many bike-sharing stations, so people can easily rent a bike. I sometimes use one to commute to work.
× When I was six, I practiced it with my friends a lot, so I can ride a bicycle very comforta comfortably now.
✓ When I was six, I practiced it with my friends a lot, so I can ride a bicycle very comfortably now.
这里需要用副词 comfortably 修饰动词短语 ride a bicycle。原句中的“comforta comfortably”包含重复和未完成的词,保留正确的副词 comfortably 即可。
× I love riding bicycle very much.
✓ I love riding a bicycle very much.
bicycle 是可数名词单数,泛指骑自行车这项活动时,前面需要加不定冠词 a。
× There are mainly bike stations for rent rental renting.
✓ There are mainly bike rental stations.
原句中“rent rental renting”是重复且结构混乱的表达。可以用 bike rental 作名词修饰语,组成 bike rental stations(自行车租赁站)。
× So I often ride rent a bike and to commute to work or go.
✓ So I often rent a bike to commute to work or go places.
原句中“ride rent”重复使用了动词,而且“and to commute”与前面的结构不平行。表达租自行车应使用 rent a bike;用 to commute 和 to go places 表示骑车的目的,结构更清楚、平行。