Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你有直接回答问题，并提供了自行车的颜色、购买时间和使用场景，内容比较具体。不过，“I had a bag when I was a chair”与问题不符，注意使用准确的词；“bought my”应改为“bought me”，“I roll it”应改为“ I rode it”。最后的“in falling”意思不清楚，可以改成“in the fall”或直接描述和朋友骑车的经历。建议先给出清晰回答，再补充一两个具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me for my eighth birthday. I rode it to school and to the park almost every day. After class, I often rode around with my friends.

Gợi ý: 你尝试回答了自行车是否受欢迎，但目前多处表达不清，影响理解。“the back”应改成“bikes”，“Arab people”只有在确实指阿拉伯人时才使用；如果想泛指本国居民，可以说“people”。注意区分“ride a bike”（骑自行车）和“learn to ride”（学习骑车），并删去重复和填充词。建议先明确表态，再说明人们骑车的用途或原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to get around their neighborhoods. Some children also learn to ride bikes when they are young.

× It was a small red bike my parents bought my for my 8th birthday and I roll it to school and to the park almost every day.

✓ It was a small red bike my parents bought me for my 8th birthday and I roll it to school and to the park almost every day.

这里的“my”是形容词性物主代词，不能直接作“bought”的宾语。应使用宾格代词“me”。也可以说“bought the bike for me”。

× It was a small red bike my parents bought my for my 8th birthday and I roll it to school and to the park almost every day.

✓ It was a small red bike my parents bought me for my 8th birthday, and I rode it to school and to the park almost every day.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，时态应保持过去时。“roll”应改为“rode”（ride 的过去式）。

× I remember riding with my friends after class in falling.

✓ I remember riding with my friends after class in the fall.

表示“在秋天”时，通常说“in the fall”，不能说“in falling”。季节前通常用介词“in”，并使用名词“fall”。

× MMM, yeah, the back are PO popular in my country.

✓ Mmm, yeah, bikes are popular in my country.

主语应为复数“bikes”，因此搭配复数动词“are”。另外，“the back”不符合这里表达“自行车”的意思，应说“bikes”。

× Umm actually Arab people like to, to buy bikes to ride on the to the walk and uh, some people to uh, right to learn.

✓ Umm, actually, Arab people like to buy bikes to ride, and some people buy bikes to learn to ride.

“some people to ...”缺少谓语动词，句子结构不完整。可补上“buy bikes”，并用“to learn to ride”表达“学习骑车”。