Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a bike when I was child. My mother bought it for me. It was pink because I love bright colors when I was uh at primary school and it has small wheels and uh smaller wheels for preventing me not to
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Um, yes, I do think they're popular in my country because there are many streets and in my country and there are many, um, places within about 30 minutes bike transport so it's very convenient and a green way
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车,并保持过去时一致:用“I had”,而不是“I do have”。接着补充一两个具体细节,例如颜色、购买者或骑车时的感受。避免重复“small wheels”,并将“for preventing me not to”改为自然、完整的表达;回答应以完整句子结束。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought me a pink one because I loved bright colours, and its small wheels made it easy for me to ride.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 开头回答明确,也给出了便利和环保两个理由。删去重复的“in my country”,并将“within about 30 minutes bike transport”改为更自然的表达,如“within a 30-minute bike ride”。可以补充一个具体场景,并用连接词把理由组织起来;注意以完整句子收尾。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to get to nearby shops or work because cycling is convenient and environmentally friendly.
× Yes, I do have a bike when I was child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
这段话是在回忆童年,应该使用一般过去时。这里的“do have”应改为“had”。
× Yes, I do have a bike when I was child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
“child”是单数可数名词,前面需要冠词,因此应说“a child”。
× It was pink because I love bright colors when I was uh at primary school.
✓ It was pink because I loved bright colors when I was at primary school.
句子描述的是上小学时的情况,属于过去的时间背景,因此“love”应使用过去式“loved”。
× It has small wheels and uh smaller wheels for preventing me not to
✓ It had small wheels and smaller wheels to prevent me from ...
这里继续描述童年时的自行车,应使用过去式“had”,而不是现在时“has”。此外,“prevent”常用结构是“prevent someone from doing something”;原句后半部分没有说完,无法补出具体动作。
× There are many places within about 30 minutes bike transport.
✓ There are many places that are about 30 minutes away by bike.
表示骑自行车所需的时间时,可以说“by bike”。原句“30 minutes bike transport”缺少合适的介词和完整的表达结构。