Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I don't have my own bike in my child because my brother only buy bike to my brother. So I feel very sad at that time.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in our country, go out, buy bike. It's very popular because it's very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答能表达“小时候没有自己的自行车”和难过的感受,但时态和表达方式有明显错误。谈过去要用过去时,例如用“didn’t have”和“felt”;“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”。“my brother only buy bike to my brother”意思不清楚,可以说明哥哥有自行车,而你没有。建议先直接回答,再补充一个具体原因或感受。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. My older brother had one, but my parents didn’t buy one for me, so I felt a little left out.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 你直接回答了自行车很受欢迎,也给出了“方便”这个理由,但“in our country, go out, buy bike”不是完整、自然的句子。建议说明哪些人会骑自行车,或举出通勤、短途出行等具体用途,并使用连接词把理由和例子连起来。注意使用复数“bikes”或“a bike”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient and inexpensive. Many people ride them for short trips or to get to work, especially in busy cities where traffic can be heavy.
× I don't have my own bike in my child because my brother only buy bike to my brother. So I feel very sad at that time.
✓ I didn't have my own bike when I was a child because my brother only bought a bike for my brother, so I felt very sad at that time.
这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情,因此要使用一般过去时:don't have 应改为 didn't have,buy 应改为 bought,feel 应改为 felt。讲过去的经历时,要确保相关动词的时态一致。
× I don't have my own bike in my child because my brother only buy bike to my brother.
✓ I didn't have my own bike when I was a child because my brother only bought a bike for my brother.
表达“在我小时候”时,不能说 in my child;可以说 when I was a child。表示“为某人买东西”通常用 buy something for someone,因此这里应把 to 改为 for。
× My brother only buy bike to my brother.
✓ My brother only bought a bike for my brother.
bike 是可数名词单数,前面需要冠词。这里应使用 a,构成 a bike。说单数可数名词时,通常不能省略限定词。
× Yes, in our country, go out, buy bike.
✓ Yes, in our country, people go out and buy bikes.
原句缺少主语,go out 和 buy 也没有恰当地连接起来。可以加上主语 people,并用 and 连接两个动作,构成完整句子。
× Yes, in our country, go out, buy bike. It's very popular because it's very convenient.
✓ Yes, in our country, people go out and buy bikes. They are very popular because they are very convenient.
这里谈论的是一类自行车,而不是一辆特定的自行车,所以应使用复数 bikes。后面的代词和 be 动词也要与复数名词保持一致,因此用 they are,而不是 it is。