Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。注意这里应使用“bike”或“bicycle”，而不是“bag”；“learned how to ride”后面应接“a bike”，“ride me to everywhere”可改为“ride it to different places”。“delicate”不适合描述自行车，可根据实际情况使用“small”或“little”。避免重复使用“uh”，并拆分过长的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a small bike when I was about six, and he taught me how to ride it. I often rode it to the parks near my home.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，但要准确使用“bikes”或“shared bikes”，不能用“bags”或“backs”。“when we have some very urgent things”表达不自然，可改为“when we need to get somewhere quickly”或“for short trips”。建议用连接词组织理由，并补充一个具体场景；同时减少填充词“uh”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes in big cities like Beijing. They’re convenient for short trips, and people can easily rent one using a phone app. I also enjoy cycling because it gives me a sense of freedom.

× Uh, my dad used to buy me a delicate little bag for me

✓ Uh, my dad used to buy me a delicate little bag.

“buy me something”已经表示“给我买某物”，后面再加“for me”会重复表达受益对象。可以说“buy me something”，也可以说“buy something for me”，不要同时使用这两种结构。

× I learned how to ride the bag since I was only 6

✓ I learned how to ride the bag when I was only 6.

这里讲的是童年时发生的过去事件，应使用“when”说明当时的年龄。“Since”通常表示从过去某个时间一直延续到现在，通常需要搭配现在完成时；此处改成“when I was only 6”更符合句意和时态。

× I used this bag to ride me to everywhere

✓ I used this bag to ride everywhere.

“ride me”表示“骑我”，其中“me”不是这里需要的宾语。表达自己骑车去某处时，不需要加“me”。

× I used this bag to ride me to everywhere

✓ I used this bag to ride everywhere.

“everywhere”本身表示“到处”，前面不需要加介词“to”。可以直接说“ride everywhere”。