Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly and distinguish clearly between a bicycle and a motorbike, since your current answer first says you did not have a bike and then says you had a bicycle. Use the correct article in “when I was a child,” avoid repeated fillers, and replace “travel my city area” with a more natural phrase such as “ride around my neighbourhood.”

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a motorbike as a child, but I did have a bicycle. I used to ride it around my neighbourhood with my friends, especially in the afternoons.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain the main reason in a clear sequence. The phrase “inboard tax” is unclear; use “import tax” if that is what you mean, and avoid the contradictory wording “much more not that affordable.” Clarify that cars are expensive, so many people choose motorbikes as a more practical option. Use “motorbikes” consistently and add punctuation between ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in Nepal. Cars can be expensive because of high import taxes, so many people choose motorbikes instead. They are generally more practical for getting around, particularly in busy areas.

× I did not have a bike when I was kid.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a kid.

The singular countable noun kid needs an article. Use a before kid when referring to a child generally.

× I did not have motorbike.

✓ I did not have a motorbike.

Motorbike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a when introducing one motorbike.

× Yes, the bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun without the. The definite article the would suggest a specific group of bikes.

× As in my country, Nepal, the cost, the inboard tax is 300%.

✓ In my country, Nepal, the inboard tax is 300%.

Starting this statement with As leaves the relationship between the opening phrase and the main clause unclear. Use In my country to introduce the location directly. The repeated phrase the cost also interrupts the sentence structure.

× So the normal people cannot afford to buy cars and other vehicles so bike is much more not that affordable but people buy it generally.

✓ So normal people cannot afford to buy cars and other vehicles, so a bike is not that affordable, but people generally buy it.

Remove the before normal people because the sentence refers to people generally. Add a before the singular countable noun bike. Also, place generally before the verb phrase people buy it; this is the usual position for an adverb describing how people buy something.

× So the normal people cannot afford to buy cars and other vehicles so bike is much more not that affordable but people buy it generally.

✓ So normal people cannot afford to buy cars and other vehicles, so a bike is not that affordable, but people generally buy it.

Much more does not combine correctly with not that affordable in this sentence. To preserve the meaning expressed by not that affordable, remove much more. Use much more affordable only if you intend to make a comparison.