Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so, cuz we got a lot of well shared by Secure Round City and they got different they are from different company and by different payment method it depends on which kind of user you are.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,但只有一个词,内容过于简短,无法充分展示口语能力。可以先直接回答,再补充一到两个具体细节,例如自行车的外观、骑车的地点,或你通常和谁一起骑。注意控制在两三句话内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了自行车共享服务很多、品牌和付款方式不同的观点,但句子中有重复和语法错误,部分表达也不清楚(如“well shared by Secure Round City”)。建议用“bike-sharing services”表达共享单车,先明确回答,再用一两个具体信息解释其受欢迎的原因;可用“because”连接理由,并注意主谓一致和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bike-sharing services are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. There are several companies, and people can usually pay through a mobile app. They’re convenient for short trips, so they suit a wide range of users.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× They are from different company and by different payment method.

✓ They are from different companies and have different payment methods.

“Different”后面接可数名词时,如果表示多个不同的公司或付款方式,名词应使用复数形式,因此应将“company”和“method”改为“companies”和“methods”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Yes, I think so, cuz we got a lot of well shared by Secure Round City and they got different they are from different company and by different payment method it depends on which kind of user you are.

✓ Yes, I think so, because we have a lot of shared bikes provided by Secure Round City. They are from different companies and have different payment methods. It depends on what kind of user you are.

原句中“they got different they are from...”出现重复和句子成分衔接混乱,后半部分也缺少清晰的句子边界,影响理解。可以将相关内容拆成几个完整句子,并用“they are from...”和“have...”分别表达来源和付款方式。口语中的“cuz”可改为较正式的“because”;“what kind of user”在这里比“which kind of user”更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Different— Dissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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