Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I actually had one a bike, but I don't I didn't know how can uh use a driver bike. That's why I have never used it uh.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't think they are so popular in our country uh, because in our country, uh, the cars are really so popular. That's why uh people uh, don't use generally bikes don't ride bikes. Uh, I think it's not so normal because I can see the abroad they use, they ride bikes.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve “I had a bike” ifadesini kullanın; “one a bike” gereksiz tekrardır. Bisiklet kullanmayı bilmediğinizi anlatmak için “I didn’t know how to ride it” deyin; “use a driver bike” doğal bir ifade değildir. Geçmişteki durumu anlatırken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın. Yanıtı kısa tutup tek bir açıklayıcı ayrıntıyla tamamlayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. I mostly used it to play with my friends in the yard.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Görüşünüz anlaşılır; ancak “in our country” ve “popular” ifadelerini tekrarlamayın. Önce net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bisiklet kullanımının neden az olduğunu açıklayın. “People don’t ride bikes generally” yerine “people generally don’t ride bikes” veya “few people cycle” kullanın. “I can see the abroad” doğal değildir; “when I travel abroad” ya da “in some other countries” diyebilirsiniz. Bir bağlaçla fikrinizi toparlayın ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer driving cars. As a result, cycling isn’t a common way to get around. In some other countries, though, more people use bikes for their daily commute.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× I actually had one a bike.

✓ I actually had a bike.

The words one and a are both determiners and should not be used together before the same noun. Use a bike, or say I had one if the noun is already clear from context.

Direct and indirect speech errors

× I don't I didn't know how can uh use a driver bike.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike.

After know how, use an infinitive with to, or form an indirect question with statement word order. Do not use the direct-question order how can I. The phrase ride a bike is also the natural way to describe using a bike.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Because in our country, uh, the cars are really so popular.

✓ Because in our country, cars are really popular.

When speaking generally about cars, do not use the definite article the. The also is not needed here because it does not refer to a specific group of cars.

Incorrect adverb placement

× People uh, don't use generally bikes don't ride bikes.

✓ People generally don't ride bikes.

The adverb generally normally goes before the main verb phrase in this sentence. Place it before don't ride, and remove the repeated, unfinished phrase.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I can see the abroad they use, they ride bikes.

✓ I can see that people abroad ride bikes.

Abroad is an adverb and is not preceded by the. Use that to introduce the clause, and include people as the subject of ride.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Normal— Usual; Ordinary
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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