Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child my mother gave me a bike as a birthday gift.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, have many people by bike in support because. This can make people healthy.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且语法基本正确。可以补充一两处具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、你骑车的地点,或你当时的感受,让答案更生动;注意控制在五句话以内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday when I was about seven. It was a bright red bike, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 目前句子存在明显的语法和表达问题,“have many people by bike in support because”无法清楚表达意思。可以先直接回答“Bikes are quite popular”,再说明人们骑车的原因,并使用完整句子和连接词,例如“because”连接原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable. They are also a good way to stay healthy.
× Yes, have many people by bike in support because.
✓ Yes, many people ride bikes because they want to stay healthy.
这里的“have many people”不能用来表达“有很多人”。表达某处“有……”时应使用“There are many people...”;也可以像修改句一样,让“many people”直接作主语。“because”后面还需要接完整的原因从句,不能单独放在句末。