Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-10-24 21:33:37

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was here, my mom bought a bike for me and I rode it. Uh, when I went to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because bikes are cheaper than the car and more convenient. You can ride it on the road.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 先直接回答是否有自行车,再说明是谁买的以及你通常如何使用。这里的“when I was here”表达不清楚,如果想说“小时候”,应说“when I was young”或“when I was a child”;也可以删掉“Uh”,并把上学时骑车的信息连成完整句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought it for me, and I often rode it to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题,也给出了价格和便利性两个原因。注意比较时可以说“cheaper than cars”;主语“bikes”是复数,因此后面应使用“they”,而不是“it”。可以补充一个具体用途,例如短途出行或避开交通拥堵,让回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re cheaper than cars and convenient for short trips. People can ride them to work or to nearby shops, and they’re often a good way to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Uh, when I went to school.

✓ I rode it when I went to school.

“When I went to school”是时间状语从句,单独使用时句子不完整。应将它与主句连接,组成完整句子。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× Yes, because bikes are cheaper than the car and more convenient.

✓ Yes, because bikes are cheaper than cars and more convenient.

这里是在泛指自行车和汽车,复数名词“bikes”应与复数名词“cars”进行比较。使用单数“the car”会造成单复数不一致。泛指时可直接使用复数名词,不需要加“the”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× You can ride it on the road.

✓ You can ride them on the road.

“them”应指代前文复数名词“bikes”。原句使用单数代词“it”,与复数先行词不一致。

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