Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bird when I was a child because it's my dad buy it for me and my brother and we usually went to the cycling park to playing cycling.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently. You likely mean “bike,” not “bird.” Correct “my dad buy” to “my dad bought,” and say “go cycling” rather than “to playing cycling.” Add a clear detail about how you used the bike.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for my brother and me, and we often rode it at a nearby park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, then explain one specific reason. Avoid repeating “in my country” and “ride it.” Use “bike-sharing services” or “shared bikes,” and say “people can use them to get to different places.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Bike-sharing services are widely available, so people can use a shared bike to travel short distances conveniently.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bird when I was a child because it's my dad buy it for me and my brother and we usually went to the cycling park to playing cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bird when I was a child because my dad bought it for me and my brother, and we usually went to the cycling park to go cycling.

The sentence describes a childhood experience, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. The purchase also happened in the past, so use bought instead of buy. Remove it's because it does not form a grammatical clause before my dad bought it.

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I have a bird when I was a child because it's my dad buy it for me and my brother and we usually went to the cycling park to playing cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bird when I was a child because my dad bought it for me and my brother, and we usually went to the cycling park to go cycling.

After to used to express purpose, use the base form of a verb, as in to go. The phrase to playing is incorrect. You can say to go cycling or to cycle.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

Do not use the preposition in before the adverb recently. Say recently, not in recently.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

Some is used with plural countable nouns, so bike should be plural: bikes. The pronoun referring to the plural noun should also be them, not it.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

The definite article the is unnecessary before in my country. Use in my country without an article.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

The phrase it's for people can use it combines clauses incorrectly. Connect the ideas with and, then use the complete clause people can use them. Avoid repeating the phrase in my country.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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